Plot or Premise

A private investigator in L.A. investigates the death of her uncle, an old stand-up comic.

What I Liked

The main character, Mary Cooper, is an unfiltered voice in a world of serious investigators. Every line out of her mouth is practically a one-liner, and while that SHOULD grate on the nerves, it doesn’t. Just about everyone in the book is a comic, and the lines come fast and furious at different points. Once you buy into the premise, it’s quite enjoyable. I originally tripped over this story when it was shared online in a newsgroup, and I had no way of knowing at the time it was actually a nom de plume for Dan Ames.

What I Didn’t Like

There is a scene right in the middle where a bunch of guys basically go to rape Mary while wearing masks. Except their identity is relatively obvious to everyone except Mary, before and after the attempt, and the reason for their behaviour doesn’t even make any sense, at least not towards Mary. No to mention some stupid interactions with a police sergeant that keeps escalating, even though the cop is really ambitious and it’s going to blow up in her face, more Keystone Kops than by the book.

The Bottom Line

Funny dialogue, a couple of plot holes